Writing: Your movie review

 PLAN

choose your favorite movie or a movie you saw recently. Include the information in the Focus on Content box and take notes in a chart like the one below.

Soul

The main characters and actors

Joe gardner--Jamie Fox

22--Tyna Fey

The directors

 Pete Docter and Kemp Powers 

The type of movie

Animated fantasy comedy-drama

The time and place 

In june 2018-- New york

A short description of the story

Joe Gardner, a high school music teacher living in New York City, feels trapped in life and unsatisfied in his work. They meet Moonwind, a beggar with powers who enters the area to rescue lost souls. As 22 flees with Joe following behind, Terry catches up with them and takes them both to the Great Before, where 22 sees that his plate has been completed.

Why you like it or don`t like it

- the soundtrack is tremendously crazy it's very beautiful all the music they did for the movie

- the animation is spectacular I did not find any fault regarding the 

WRITE

Joe Gardner, a high school music teacher living in New York City, feels trapped in life and unsatisfied in his work. He dreams of a career in jazz, which his seamstress mother, Libba, opposes, fearing that he will not be financially secure. They meet Moonwind, a beggar with powers who enters the area to rescue lost souls. He agrees to help Joe return to his body and they learn that Joe's fall down the drain sent him into a coma. As she flees with Joe following behind, Terry catches up with them and takes them both to the Great Before, where he sees that his plate has been completed. However, Joe tells her that it is her experiences and tastes that earned her the badge. Angry, 22 throws the badge at Joe and disappears into the area.

CHECK

Check your writing. Can you answer "yes" to these questions?

Is information from the Focus on Content box in your review?

Yes, It is

Do you use so and because to show how events connect?

Yes, I do