Short story

 short story 

Plan:

Beginning:

On a sunny day as I walked through the countryside with my whole family a little animal ran everywhere we got scared because we thought it was a rat,
Middle
with great fear we approached and looked at a few little ears peeking out of a hollow.
Ending:
Finally, a little bunny showed up, I was scared but we rescued him and it’s al very well after you’ve rescued her and taken her to the vet for review and to tell us everything’s fine.

Write:

On a sunny day as I walked through the countryside with my whole family a little animal ran everywhere we got scared because we thought it was a rat, with great fear we approached and looked at a few little ears peeking out of a hollow.

Finally, a little bunny showed up, I was scared but we rescued him and it’s al very well after you’ve rescued her and taken her to the vet for review and to tell us everything’s fine.

Check:

Does your history have a beginning, middle, and an ending? Are the events in chronological order?

Yes, my story have a beginning, middle and an ending

Do you use sequencing words correctly?

Yes, I use sequencing words correctly